Hi Malia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Wow! Sounds like fun! I loved the way you added photos and lots of information about what you enjoyed at Rangitoto Island.
It sounds like Rangitoto Island is quite a special place. The view looks spectacular, it looks like it was a nice day as well. Was it tiring to walk up the mountain?
To improve, maybe you could add in where Rangitoto Island is and some information on the history of it.
Hi Malia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Wow! Sounds like fun! I loved the way you added photos and lots of information about what you enjoyed at Rangitoto Island.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like Rangitoto Island is quite a special place. The view looks spectacular, it looks like it was a nice day as well. Was it tiring to walk up the mountain?
To improve, maybe you could add in where Rangitoto Island is and some information on the history of it.
Excellent work!
Mia