Hey there Malia, I'm Nikita a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School, I enjoyed looking through your slideshow animation of mothers day, it was very cherishing and well made.
Like what Zahrah has said, maybe you could think of putting a picture of your own mother to show your appreciation not only to others mothers but your own?
Next time you could maybe make sure the slideshow is faster, or just look over the presentation to make sure it's exactly right.
Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added a Happy Mother's Day rounded image.
I Did you think about putting a photo of your mom?
Next time, instead of making so much slides you could make a biteable.
Regards, Zahrah!
Hey there Malia,
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School, I enjoyed looking through your slideshow animation of mothers day, it was very cherishing and well made.
Like what Zahrah has said, maybe you could think of putting a picture of your own mother to show your appreciation not only to others mothers but your own?
Next time you could maybe make sure the slideshow is faster, or just look over the presentation to make sure it's exactly right.
Kind Regards,
Nikita
Hello it's Skylah from Grey main school i like your mothers day card it is very thoughtful next time you could explain why you did this from Skylah
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